Project 4 Analysis

I have such mixed feelings about this project. I enjoyed it. I had fun writing something funny. But I am always so critical on my humor that I never really thought what I wrote was super funny. It was a roller coaster of laughs and hates as I was typing it. I did not get any suggestions of how to make it better during the group workshop which was kind of expected since people don't really like to say what's bad about your project in your face. At least for this project. So when I went to revise it, I did change a few small things, nothing that really changed the paper significantly, and I even went and had my paper read by my roommate and a friend who goes to a different school. I always have the same problem with each of my projects. Revision. So for my complete global revision for this project I think I am going to try and just take my key jokes and put them in a comic. It is going to be hard, but it will make me discover what the key points of my sketch is and be able to only use the important parts. Maybe that's what I had to originally do for all my other projects instead of just doing minor changes. Sucks that it took me all semester to find that out.